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    **Stepping Up: The Day I Discovered the Leader in Me**

    Mario R. Rodriguez Garcia

    Department of Arts and Sciences, Miami Regional University

    ENC1101: English Composition I

    Professor Shazia Zaidi

    May 19, 2026

    **Stepping Up: The Day I Discovered the Leader in Me**

    Until my junior year in college, no one could ever have accused me of being much of a leader. I was an only child, so I never had to push myself to the front of a crowd of siblings to get the attention of my parents. Consequently, up until my sophomore year, quietly going with the flow had been working quite well for me. One day, a class project inspired me to face my fears and brought out the leader in me, to my own utter amazement. Hanging back and avoiding the spotlight has never been an option since.

    **Groups**

    As a change of pace, my Business 101 instructor decided to divide our class into groups of five students each. Inspired by a popular reality television show, Professor Tyson said that the teams would compete against each other at performing different business tasks. Over the course of the semester, we would each get a chance to compete and test our abilities with activities like buying and selling, inventing our own product and marketing it, and so on. Whichever team came in first would receive a prize, as well as a lot of bonus points toward our final grades. But first, Professor Tyson said, each team’s task was to come up with and agree upon a team name.

    Somewhat reluctantly, we all scraped our desks across the floor to arrange ourselves in our randomly assigned groups. The corners of our desktops touching, my group made a tight circle in the corner of the room near the window. The lure of the outside world beckoned, as I looked at the four students who would become my business partners.

    **Maya Giordano**

    First of all, I noticed that Maya Giordano was part of our team, and my pulse sped up a little bit, because I had been admiring her from afar ever since the beginning of the semester. She had an appealing personality and a flashing smile, and she always seemed to have the right answers to our instructor’s questions when we went over our readings in class. Maya was discussing her geometry class with her friend Claire Washington, also part of our group. Claire was a good student, too, but didn’t speak up in class much. I couldn’t help being a little worried that the two of them were socializing rather than getting down to the task at hand. But I certainly didn’t want to make any enemies, so I just smiled and looked around at the rest of the team.

    **Justin Hubbs**

    Next to Claire, Justin Hubbs, your stereotypical jock-type, sat sprawled low in his chair, clicking his mechanical pencil until a broken piece of lead fell out. He pushed it around the desk with his finger until it fell on the floor, then he closed his eyes wearily and seemed to drop into a light doze. Next to Justin was a very thin, tall guy wearing a wrinkled button-up shirt whose name I didn’t know. He looked as tense as I felt. I kept wondering when someone would say something that would signal the start of our project meeting.

    **Team Name**

    It wasn’t long before Professor Tyson stepped in to say “Remember, come up with a team name you’re all happy with because you’ll be stuck with it for the rest of the semester.”

    The professor’s excited voice seemed to wake up Justin. He looked over at Claire and Maya with a scowl on his face. Finally, the guy whose name I didn’t know looked over at me in mild disgust. “Well, any ideas?” He looked as though he didn’t expect much out of me.

    Feeling defensive, I just tossed the ball back into his court. “Not yet, you?”

    He didn’t bother to answer me, just looked down at his notebook and started writing something I couldn’t read.

    Suddenly, to lighten the mood, Maya turned away from Claire to say “We should be team Slytherin, Like Harry Potter.”

    “No, team Wicked,” Claire almost shouted. “Because we are so bad, we’re good. Wicked good!”

    We all laughed, but I was starting to notice that we didn’t seem to be getting anywhere. Of course nobody liked these suggestions, but nobody said anything. So, I did what any good follower would do. I mumbled, “Whatever you guys think.”

    **Consensus**

    Anonymous guy shot me a scornful look. Maya and Claire went back to comparing notes about their geometry exam. Justin was scrolling through his phone, which he was holding under the desk out of sight of our instructor. Professor Tyson reminded us above the roar of voices that we wouldn’t be judged on the name of our team, and that the goal was to arrive at a consensus, a name we all agreed was a strong one, and be ready to move on to the assignment he was passing out, our first selling task. The sooner we came up with a team name and moved on, the sooner we could get started on the real work of the competition.

    **Circle around Me**

    Just then, I started to feel a volcano of uncomfortable emotions silently rumbling somewhere inside my chest. It was clear to me that we had to come to an agreement fast. I started to feel a little-used part of myself demanding to be heard. Impressing Maya wasn’t the issue; winning the game wasn’t even that important to me. I just wanted to do something to bring these fellow students in the circle around me together. Suddenly, something seemed to rise to the surface of my spinning brain. I started talking in a calm and friendly voice that sliced through the apathy and distraction that had infected our group. “I’m Michael,” I said. “Why doesn’t each of us take turns saying our name and the first name that we can think of for our team. I’ll start.”

    I pointed to my chest and said, “Michael. Team Venture.” Then I turned to my left and looked at Maya and said in a businesslike tone, “Next.”

    Maya looked surprised and happy, as if she’d been handed an unexpected gift. “Maya. Team Enterprise.” Then she paused and looked at me, and I said, “Thanks, Maya.” Then I looked at Claire and said in the same businesslike tone, “Next.”

    “Claire. Team Perfection.”

    “Thanks, Claire. Next.”

    “Wait, um, OK, Justin. Team Touchdown.”

    “Thanks, Justin. Next.”

    “Kevin. Team Ingenuity.”

    “Thanks, Kevin,” I said. “Let’s vote.”

    **Learned to be a Leader**

    The team name we came up with that day doesn’t matter. What does matter is that I learned to be a leader. I remember is the feeling of taking charge, taking everyone’s feelings and ideas into account, and making something positive happen as a result. We had our name, the professor passed us our first assignment as a team, and we skyrocketed onward from there. Rather than grow annoyed at my “bossiness,” the team elected me as their leader. In fact, Maya told me later, “Thanks for taking all of our ideas seriously. You really listened, and you kept us focused. Because you wanted us to work, we wanted to work for you.” After an enlightening rewarding struggle, our team came in second in the game overall, and we formed lasting friendships as a result of our teamwork.

    **A Successful Business Owner**

    Ever since that day, I think of my first experience as a leader. Today, I am a successful business owner who leads my employees towards our goals every day. I realize now that leadership qualities were in my makeup from the start. I just needed to allow them to come to the surface.

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    **Stepping Up: The Day I Discovered the Leader in Me**

    Mario R. Rodriguez Garcia

    Department of Arts and Sciences, Miami Regional University

    ENC1101: English Composition I

    Professor Shazia Zaidi

    May 19, 2026

    **Stepping Up: The Day I Discovered the Leader in Me**

    Until my junior year in college, no one could ever have accused me of being much of a leader. I was an only child, so I never had to push myself to the front of a crowd of siblings to get the attention of my parents. Consequently, up until my sophomore year, quietly going with the flow had been working quite well for me. One day, a class project inspired me to face my fears and brought out the leader in me, to my own utter amazement. Hanging back and avoiding the spotlight has never been an option since.

    **Groups**

    As a change of pace, my Business 101 instructor decided to divide our class into groups of five students each. Inspired by a popular reality television show, Professor Tyson said that the teams would compete against each other at performing different business tasks. Over the course of the semester, we would each get a chance to compete and test our abilities with activities like buying and selling, inventing our own product and marketing it, and so on. Whichever team came in first would receive a prize, as well as a lot of bonus points toward our final grades. But first, Professor Tyson said, each team’s task was to come up with and agree upon a team name.

    Somewhat reluctantly, we all scraped our desks across the floor to arrange ourselves in our randomly assigned groups. The corners of our desktops touching, my group made a tight circle in the corner of the room near the window. The lure of the outside world beckoned, as I looked at the four students who would become my business partners.

    **Maya Giordano**

    First of all, I noticed that Maya Giordano was part of our team, and my pulse sped up a little bit, because I had been admiring her from afar ever since the beginning of the semester. She had an appealing personality and a flashing smile, and she always seemed to have the right answers to our instructor’s questions when we went over our readings in class. Maya was discussing her geometry class with her friend Claire Washington, also part of our group. Claire was a good student, too, but didn’t speak up in class much. I couldn’t help being a little worried that the two of them were socializing rather than getting down to the task at hand. But I certainly didn’t want to make any enemies, so I just smiled and looked around at the rest of the team.

    **Justin Hubbs**

    Next to Claire, Justin Hubbs, your stereotypical jock-type, sat sprawled low in his chair, clicking his mechanical pencil until a broken piece of lead fell out. He pushed it around the desk with his finger until it fell on the floor, then he closed his eyes wearily and seemed to drop into a light doze. Next to Justin was a very thin, tall guy wearing a wrinkled button-up shirt whose name I didn’t know. He looked as tense as I felt. I kept wondering when someone would say something that would signal the start of our project meeting.

    **Team Name**

    It wasn’t long before Professor Tyson stepped in to say “Remember, come up with a team name you’re all happy with because you’ll be stuck with it for the rest of the semester.”

    The professor’s excited voice seemed to wake up Justin. He looked over at Claire and Maya with a scowl on his face. Finally, the guy whose name I didn’t know looked over at me in mild disgust. “Well, any ideas?” He looked as though he didn’t expect much out of me.

    Feeling defensive, I just tossed the ball back into his court. “Not yet, you?”

    He didn’t bother to answer me, just looked down at his notebook and started writing something I couldn’t read.

    Suddenly, to lighten the mood, Maya turned away from Claire to say “We should be team Slytherin, Like Harry Potter.”

    “No, team Wicked,” Claire almost shouted. “Because we are so bad, we’re good. Wicked good!”

    We all laughed, but I was starting to notice that we didn’t seem to be getting anywhere. Of course nobody liked these suggestions, but nobody said anything. So, I did what any good follower would do. I mumbled, “Whatever you guys think.”

    **Consensus**

    Anonymous guy shot me a scornful look. Maya and Claire went back to comparing notes about their geometry exam. Justin was scrolling through his phone, which he was holding under the desk out of sight of our instructor. Professor Tyson reminded us above the roar of voices that we wouldn’t be judged on the name of our team, and that the goal was to arrive at a consensus, a name we all agreed was a strong one, and be ready to move on to the assignment he was passing out, our first selling task. The sooner we came up with a team name and moved on, the sooner we could get started on the real work of the competition.

    **Circle around Me**

    Just then, I started to feel a volcano of uncomfortable emotions silently rumbling somewhere inside my chest. It was clear to me that we had to come to an agreement fast. I started to feel a little-used part of myself demanding to be heard. Impressing Maya wasn’t the issue; winning the game wasn’t even that important to me. I just wanted to do something to bring these fellow students in the circle around me together. Suddenly, something seemed to rise to the surface of my spinning brain. I started talking in a calm and friendly voice that sliced through the apathy and distraction that had infected our group. “I’m Michael,” I said. “Why doesn’t each of us take turns saying our name and the first name that we can think of for our team. I’ll start.”

    I pointed to my chest and said, “Michael. Team Venture.” Then I turned to my left and looked at Maya and said in a businesslike tone, “Next.”

    Maya looked surprised and happy, as if she’d been handed an unexpected gift. “Maya. Team Enterprise.” Then she paused and looked at me, and I said, “Thanks, Maya.” Then I looked at Claire and said in the same businesslike tone, “Next.”

    “Claire. Team Perfection.”

    “Thanks, Claire. Next.”

    “Wait, um, OK, Justin. Team Touchdown.”

    “Thanks, Justin. Next.”

    “Kevin. Team Ingenuity.”

    “Thanks, Kevin,” I said. “Let’s vote.”

    **Learned to be a Leader**

    The team name we came up with that day doesn’t matter. What does matter is that I learned to be a leader. I remember is the feeling of taking charge, taking everyone’s feelings and ideas into account, and making something positive happen as a result. We had our name, the professor passed us our first assignment as a team, and we skyrocketed onward from there. Rather than grow annoyed at my “bossiness,” the team elected me as their leader. In fact, Maya told me later, “Thanks for taking all of our ideas seriously. You really listened, and you kept us focused. Because you wanted us to work, we wanted to work for you.” After an enlightening rewarding struggle, our team came in second in the game overall, and we formed lasting friendships as a result of our teamwork.

    **A Successful Business Owner**

    Ever since that day, I think of my first experience as a leader. Today, I am a successful business owner who leads my employees towards our goals every day. I realize now that leadership qualities were in my makeup from the start. I just needed to allow them to come to the surface.

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    Analytical Paper 1

    **Analytical Paper**

    Rodolfo Nieto

    West Coast University

    English 240: Written Communications

    Melissa Cueto

    May 2026

    **Oppression, Irony, and the Powerlessness of Women in Kate Chopin’s Stories**

    Kate Chopin was an American writer of the 19th century whose works questioned the social constructions of their era, especially gender and race.
    _“Désirée’s Baby”_(published January 14, 1893) is a story about a woman who is left by her husband when their baby turns out to be of mixed race, whereas
    _“The Story of an Hour”_(published April 19, 1894) is about a woman who momentarily feels liberated after her husband dies. Both stories are set in the American South of the 1800s, a place ruled by strict racial and gender inequalities.
    _“The Story of an Hour”_ and
    _“Désirée’s Baby”_ by Kate Chopin have several similar elements—the theme of oppression, dramatic irony, setting symbolism, and the powerlessness of women—which altogether help to successfully criticize the devastating social expectations of 19th-century American society (Chopin, 1893, 1894).

    Both stories demonstrate how women are trapped by the people and systems surrounding them, and how oppression ultimately destroys them. “There would be no powerful will bending hers in that blind persistence with which men and women believe they have a right to impose a private will upon a fellow-creature” (Chopin, 1894). Louise understood the domination of her husband as something he did not realize was harmful, revealing that her marriage was more like a prison than a loving relationship. “Yes, go.” “Do you want me to go?” “Yes, I want you to go” (Chopin, 1893). Armand treats Désirée coldly, demonstrating that he holds total power over her life; a single word from him collapses her entire world, and she has no ability to resist or defend herself. “When he frowned she trembled, but loved him. When he smiled, she asked no greater blessing of God” (Chopin, 1893). This passage reveals how completely Désirée’s emotional well-being depended on Armand’s moods, illustrating the total emotional control men exercised over women in this era. “She breathed a quick prayer that life might be long. It was only yesterday she had thought with a shudder that life might be long” (Chopin, 1894). The reversal in Louise’s feelings about the length of her life shows how oppressive her marriage truly was—what once felt like a burden now feels like a gift the moment she believes she is free.

    In addition to oppression, both stories employ dramatic irony to deliver their most powerful and gut-wrenching final moments. “Night and day, I thank the good God for having so arranged our lives that our dear Armand will never know that his mother…belongs to the race that is cursed with the brand of slavery” (Chopin, 1893). Armand sought to destroy his family to protect his “pure” name, yet he himself was of mixed race all along—making his cruelty utterly pointless and deeply ironic. “When the doctors came they said she had died of heart disease—of the joy that kills” (Chopin, 1894). The doctors believe Louise died of joy, but the reader knows she died from losing the freedom she had just discovered—creating the story’s sharpest irony. “It was he who had been in the newspaper office when intelligence of the railroad disaster was received, with Brently Mallard’s name leading the list of ‘killed’” (Chopin, 1894). The reader is told from the very first paragraph that Brently may not actually be dead, since the news was unverified. This creates dramatic irony throughout the story as Louise celebrates a freedom that was never real. “There was the remnant of one back in the drawer from which he took them. But it was not Désirée’s; it was part of an old letter from his mother to his father” (Chopin, 1893). Chopin withholds the reveal of Armand’s true ancestry until the very last lines, so the reader understands simultaneously with Armand that everything he did to Désirée was based on a lie about his own identity.

    In addition to irony, the physical settings of both stories are used to reflect the emotional states of the characters. “She could see in the open square before her house the tops of trees that were all aquiver with the new spring life. The delicious breath of rain was in the air” (Chopin, 1894). The spring scene reflects Louise’s internal awakening, as though nature itself is celebrating alongside her newfound sense of freedom. “Big, solemn oaks grew close to it, and their thick-leaved, far-reaching branches shadowed it like a pall” (Chopin, 1893). The word “pall”—a cloth draped over a coffin—foreshadows death even before any tragedy occurs, establishing L’Abri as a doomed, oppressive place from the start. “There were patches of blue sky showing here and there through the clouds that had met and piled one above the other in the west facing her window” (Chopin, 1894). The blue sky breaking through dark clouds is a symbol of hope and freedom emerging from the suffocating weight of Louise’s marriage, mirroring her emotional journey in this scene. “She disappeared among the reeds and willows that grew thick along the banks of the deep, sluggish bayou; and she did not come back again” (Chopin, 1893). Désirée’s walk into the murky bayou uses the dark, still water as a symbol of death and erasure. Unlike Louise’s window of possibility, Désirée’s setting offers no escape—only disappearance.

    Most significantly, both stories portray women who have almost no control over their own lives in a male-dominated world. “She was young, with a fair, calm face, whose lines bespoke repression and even a certain strength” (Chopin, 1894). The repression visible on Louise’s face indicates that her powerlessness is not a new condition but a lifetime of suppression written into her very appearance. “Moreover he no longer loved her, because of the unconscious injury she had brought upon his home and his name” (Chopin, 1893). Armand treats Désirée as an object that either elevates or damages his social standing—never as a full person—showing how little power women had over their own value and identity in this society. “There would be no one to live for during those coming years; she would live for herself” (Chopin, 1894). The fact that living for herself is a radical, almost shocking idea for Louise reveals just how completely women’s identities were expected to be defined by their husbands in this era. “Armand looked into her eyes and did not care. He was reminded that she was nameless” (Chopin, 1893). Désirée’s lack of a family name meant she had no identity or social standing of her own—she was entirely dependent on Armand to give her one, perfectly illustrating the powerlessness of women without male validation.

    Overall, through the use of oppression, dramatic irony, symbolic setting, and the depiction of women’s powerlessness, Chopin’s two stories together create an accurate portrait of how 19th-century society failed the individuals living within its rigid constraints. These stories demonstrate that racism and sexism share the same root belief—that some people have a right to dominate others—and Chopin shows that both forms of oppression cause irreversible harm. The tragic endings suggest that Chopin believed her society could not offer justice to women, and she wrote these stories to challenge readers to imagine how it could be different. These themes remain urgently relevant today, which is testament to how far ahead of her time Kate Chopin truly was.

    **References**

    Chopin, K. (1893).
    _Désirée’s baby._ https://www.katechopin.org/pdfs/desirees-baby.pdf

    Chopin, K. (1894).
    _The story of an hour._ https://my.hrw.com/support/hos/hostpdf/host_text_219.pdf

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    eek 8 Writing
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    Paper Final Draft

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    Using the critical reading skills practiced in class, you will be writing an analytical essay.
    In order to analyze a text effectively, you will need to engage in close reading, or
    reading “between the lines.” This means that you will be choosing representative
    passages and carefully deconstructing them, highlighting meanings that may not be
    immediately obvious to fellow readers in order to support your overall interpretation of
    the text (the thesis statement).

    The idea is to reach a deep understanding of the text by examining the writer’s narrative
    elements (i.e., characters, diction, style, theme, and tone), everything that went into
    writing the piece. Whatever work you choose, you should first read it carefully (usually
    more than once) and arrive at your own understanding of what you read (as we have
    done weekly within our discussion board assignments.) The next step is to see what
    others have said about it (that’s the research part) and compare your findings with
    theirs.

    Your paper must include the following:

    ● An introduction that provides relevant background information and ends with
    your thesis statement

    ● A minimum of four body paragraphs, each of which addresses a particular
    subtopic that relates to your thesis statement

    ● A minimum of three references from reliable, academic sources, all of which
    are cited at least once in the paper. You should use at least one
    peer-reviewed source from the library databases.

    ● A conclusion that reaffirms your thesis statement and addresses wider
    implications

    ● Formatting, citations, and references must all adhere to APA style
    ● Page length – approximately 3-5 pages, not including title and reference

    pages

    Do not rely solely on the instructions you see here. Your instructor will provide a
    list of texts to choose from and further details in the announcements page, so
    make sure to check there for complete guidelines regarding your analytical paper.

    See the rubric for specific grading criteria.

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    Points: 200
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    Rubric
    Analytical Paper: Final Draft

    Criteria Ratings Pts

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    This criterion is
    linked to a
    Learning
    Outcome

    Content

    60 to >53.4 ptsExceeds ExpectationsThe writer demonstrates original
    thought and critical thinking skills as well as an ability to skillfully
    deconstruct and interpret a text or idea – to simultaneously see behind
    the surface and think beyond it, addressing wider implications. He/she
    presents a clear, focused central analysis (thesis) of the text or idea and
    supports it effectively with concrete details, examples, and sound logic.
    Other authors’ ideas are skillfully paraphrased. Direct quotations are
    minimal and well-chosen. All sources are relevant and appropriate, and
    the writer’s ideas are insightful and thought-provoking.

    53.4 to >47.4 ptsMeets ExpectationsThe writer presents and supports a
    clear and focused central analysis (thesis) of the text or idea, but ideas
    may not be consistently insightful or thought-provoking. Supporting
    details are relevant and logical but may lack depth. Other authors’ ideas
    are effectively paraphrased, and direct quotations are minimal. All
    sources are relevant and appropriate.

    47.4 to >43.2 ptsApproaches ExpectationsThe writer presents a
    central analysis (thesis) of the text or idea, but it may be overly
    general/broad and does not demonstrate thorough contemplation. He/she
    adequately supports the central analysis, but supporting points may at
    times be vague and/or lacking in originality. The writer makes an effort to
    paraphrase but at times struggles to express ideas in his/her own words.
    The essay lacks interesting details, and/or not all sources are relevant
    and appropriate.

    43.2 to >0 ptsDoes Not Meet ExpectationsThe writer’s central analysis
    (thesis) is unclear or missing, and the essay lacks focus. Supporting
    details are insufficient, not relevant, and/or not based on sound logic.
    Attempts to paraphrase do not always reflect understanding. The writer
    has not used enough sources, and/or the sources are not all relevant and
    appropriate.

    60
    pts

    This criterion is
    linked to a
    Learning
    Outcome

    Organization

    40 to >35.6 ptsExceeds ExpectationsThe writer demonstrates a clear
    sense of direction. The paper includes an engaging introduction and
    conclusion. Paragraphs are unified and arranged in a logical order. Each
    paragraph begins with a clear topic sentence that introduces the main
    idea of that paragraph. The writer smoothly transitions from paragraph to
    paragraph, showing connections between related ideas. Supporting
    details within paragraphs are well-organized, and research is
    well-integrated.

    35.6 to >31.6 ptsMeets ExpectationsThe writer demonstrates a sense
    of direction. The paper includes a strong introduction and conclusion.
    Paragraphs are unified and include topic sentences, but they may lack
    smooth transitions between ideas. The organization of supporting details
    within paragraphs may need improvement.

    31.6 to >28.8 ptsApproaches ExpectationsThe writer demonstrates
    some direction and includes an adequate introduction and conclusion,
    but topic sentences and transitions are weak. The paragraphs show unity,
    but they are not arranged in any discernable order, and supporting details
    may not always be well-organized.

    28.8 to >0 ptsDoes Not Meet ExpectationsThe writer demonstrates
    little or no direction. The introduction and conclusion are weak. It is
    difficult to identify a single subtopic for each paragraph because
    paragraphs are not unified and lack clear topic sentences or transitions.
    The order of body paragraphs seems random, as do the supporting
    details within them.

    40
    pts

    This criterion is
    linked to a
    Learning
    Outcome

    Style/Languag
    e

    40 to >35.6 ptsExceeds ExpectationsThe writer’s tone is confident,
    engaging, and appropriate for the assignment and/or the intended
    audience. The text demonstrates strong vocabulary skills and does not
    suffer from errors in word choice. The writer expresses ideas concisely,
    only using as many words as necessary to communicate a point. The
    writer achieves flow and readability by employing sentence variety
    successfully.

    35.6 to >31.6 ptsMeets ExpectationsThe writer’s tone is appropriate
    and effective overall. The text demonstrates good use of vocabulary and
    contains few (if any) errors in word choice. The writer expresses ideas
    concisely and clearly most of the time. The writer makes an effort to
    employ sentence variety.

    31.6 to >28.8 ptsApproaches ExpectationsThe writer’s tone suffers
    from one or more possible problems. Depending on the assignment, it
    may be too informal, too personal, not authoritative enough, etc.
    Numerous sentences suffer from lack of variety, awkward constructions,
    wordiness, limited vocabulary, and/or errors in word choice.

    28.8 to >0 ptsDoes Not Meet ExpectationsThe writer often fails to
    communicate ideas effectively because the paper suffers from significant
    problems with tone, language use, and/or wordiness.

    40
    pts

    This criterion is
    linked to a
    Learning
    Outcome

    Sentence
    Structure and
    Mechanics

    40 to >35.6 ptsExceeds ExpectationsThe writer makes minimal (if any)
    errors in grammar, spelling, and/or punctuation. There are no fragments
    or run-on sentences.

    35.6 to >31.6 ptsMeets ExpectationsThe writer makes some errors in
    grammar, spelling, and/or punctuation, but these errors do not
    significantly distract the reader from the substance of the text. The paper
    contains few (if any) fragments and/or run-on sentences.

    31.6 to >28.8 ptsApproaches ExpectationsThe writer makes numerous
    errors in grammar, spelling, punctuation, and/or sentence structure,
    which at times distract the reader from the substance of the text.

    28.8 to >0 ptsDoes Not Meet ExpectationsThe writer makes a
    significant number of errors in grammar, spelling, punctuation, and/or
    sentence structure, regularly distracting the reader from the substance of
    the text and hindering comprehension.

    40
    pts

    This criterion is
    linked to a
    Learning
    Outcome

    Format/Crediti
    ng Sources

    20 to >17.8 ptsExceeds ExpectationsThe writer makes minimal (if any)
    errors in APA style format, citations, or references.

    17.8 to >15.8 ptsMeets ExpectationsThe writer makes some errors in
    APA style format, citations, or references.

    15.8 to >14.4 ptsApproaches ExpectationsThe writer makes numerous
    errors in APA style format, citations, or references.

    14.4 to >0 ptsDoes Not Meet ExpectationsThe writer makes significant
    errors in APA style format, citations, or references.

    20
    pts

    Total Points: 200

    FOLLOWING THE ROUGH DRAFT PROVIDED BUT MAKE SURE IT HAS 3 SOURCES

    – eek 8 Writing Assignment: Analytical Paper Final Draft
    – Rubric

    **## Untitleddocument51.pdf**

    eek 8 Writing
    Assignment: Analytical
    Paper Final Draft

    Points 200
    Submitting a text entry box, a website url, a media recording, or a file upload

    Using the critical reading skills practiced in class, you will be writing an analytical essay.
    In order to analyze a text effectively, you will need to engage in close reading, or
    reading “between the lines.” This means that you will be choosing representative
    passages and carefully deconstructing them, highlighting meanings that may not be
    immediately obvious to fellow readers in order to support your overall interpretation of
    the text (the thesis statement).

    The idea is to reach a deep understanding of the text by examining the writer’s narrative
    elements (i.e., characters, diction, style, theme, and tone), everything that went into
    writing the piece. Whatever work you choose, you should first read it carefully (usually
    more than once) and arrive at your own understanding of what you read (as we have
    done weekly within our discussion board assignments.) The next step is to see what
    others have said about it (that’s the research part) and compare your findings with
    theirs.

    Your paper must include the following:

    ● An introduction that provides relevant background information and ends with
    your thesis statement

    ● A minimum of four body paragraphs, each of which addresses a particular
    subtopic that relates to your thesis statement

    ● A minimum of three references from reliable, academic sources, all of which
    are cited at least once in the paper. You should use at least one
    peer-reviewed source from the library databases.

    ● A conclusion that reaffirms your thesis statement and addresses wider
    implications

    ● Formatting, citations, and references must all adhere to APA style
    ● Page length – approximately 3-5 pages, not including title and reference

    pages

    Do not rely solely on the instructions you see here. Your instructor will provide a
    list of texts to choose from and further details in the announcements page, so
    make sure to check there for complete guidelines regarding your analytical paper.

    See the rubric for specific grading criteria.

    Resource: Use the Grammarly tool to catch and correct mistakes in your writing
    assignments.

    Points: 200
    Due Sunday, 11:59 p.m. (Pacific time)

    Rubric
    Analytical Paper: Final Draft

    Criteria Ratings Pts

    [https://guides.westcoastuniversity.edu/grammarly](https://guides.westcoastuniversity.edu/grammarly)

    This criterion is
    linked to a
    Learning
    Outcome

    Content

    60 to >53.4 ptsExceeds ExpectationsThe writer demonstrates original
    thought and critical thinking skills as well as an ability to skillfully
    deconstruct and interpret a text or idea – to simultaneously see behind
    the surface and think beyond it, addressing wider implications. He/she
    presents a clear, focused central analysis (thesis) of the text or idea and
    supports it effectively with concrete details, examples, and sound logic.
    Other authors’ ideas are skillfully paraphrased. Direct quotations are
    minimal and well-chosen. All sources are relevant and appropriate, and
    the writer’s ideas are insightful and thought-provoking.

    53.4 to >47.4 ptsMeets ExpectationsThe writer presents and supports a
    clear and focused central analysis (thesis) of the text or idea, but ideas
    may not be consistently insightful or thought-provoking. Supporting
    details are relevant and logical but may lack depth. Other authors’ ideas
    are effectively paraphrased, and direct quotations are minimal. All
    sources are relevant and appropriate.

    47.4 to >43.2 ptsApproaches ExpectationsThe writer presents a
    central analysis (thesis) of the text or idea, but it may be overly
    general/broad and does not demonstrate thorough contemplation. He/she
    adequately supports the central analysis, but supporting points may at
    times be vague and/or lacking in originality. The writer makes an effort to
    paraphrase but at times struggles to express ideas in his/her own words.
    The essay lacks interesting details, and/or not all sources are relevant
    and appropriate.

    43.2 to >0 ptsDoes Not Meet ExpectationsThe writer’s central analysis
    (thesis) is unclear or missing, and the essay lacks focus. Supporting
    details are insufficient, not relevant, and/or not based on sound logic.
    Attempts to paraphrase do not always reflect understanding. The writer
    has not used enough sources, and/or the sources are not all relevant and
    appropriate.

    60
    pts

    This criterion is
    linked to a
    Learning
    Outcome

    Organization

    40 to >35.6 ptsExceeds ExpectationsThe writer demonstrates a clear
    sense of direction. The paper includes an engaging introduction and
    conclusion. Paragraphs are unified and arranged in a logical order. Each
    paragraph begins with a clear topic sentence that introduces the main
    idea of that paragraph. The writer smoothly transitions from paragraph to
    paragraph, showing connections between related ideas. Supporting
    details within paragraphs are well-organized, and research is
    well-integrated.

    35.6 to >31.6 ptsMeets ExpectationsThe writer demonstrates a sense
    of direction. The paper includes a strong introduction and conclusion.
    Paragraphs are unified and include topic sentences, but they may lack
    smooth transitions between ideas. The organization of supporting details
    within paragraphs may need improvement.

    31.6 to >28.8 ptsApproaches ExpectationsThe writer demonstrates
    some direction and includes an adequate introduction and conclusion,
    but topic sentences and transitions are weak. The paragraphs show unity,
    but they are not arranged in any discernable order, and supporting details
    may not always be well-organized.

    28.8 to >0 ptsDoes Not Meet ExpectationsThe writer demonstrates
    little or no direction. The introduction and conclusion are weak. It is
    difficult to identify a single subtopic for each paragraph because
    paragraphs are not unified and lack clear topic sentences or transitions.
    The order of body paragraphs seems random, as do the supporting
    details within them.

    40
    pts

    This criterion is
    linked to a
    Learning
    Outcome

    Style/Languag
    e

    40 to >35.6 ptsExceeds ExpectationsThe writer’s tone is confident,
    engaging, and appropriate for the assignment and/or the intended
    audience. The text demonstrates strong vocabulary skills and does not
    suffer from errors in word choice. The writer expresses ideas concisely,
    only using as many words as necessary to communicate a point. The
    writer achieves flow and readability by employing sentence variety
    successfully.

    35.6 to >31.6 ptsMeets ExpectationsThe writer’s tone is appropriate
    and effective overall. The text demonstrates good use of vocabulary and
    contains few (if any) errors in word choice. The writer expresses ideas
    concisely and clearly most of the time. The writer makes an effort to
    employ sentence variety.

    31.6 to >28.8 ptsApproaches ExpectationsThe writer’s tone suffers
    from one or more possible problems. Depending on the assignment, it
    may be too informal, too personal, not authoritative enough, etc.
    Numerous sentences suffer from lack of variety, awkward constructions,
    wordiness, limited vocabulary, and/or errors in word choice.

    28.8 to >0 ptsDoes Not Meet ExpectationsThe writer often fails to
    communicate ideas effectively because the paper suffers from significant
    problems with tone, language use, and/or wordiness.

    40
    pts

    This criterion is
    linked to a
    Learning
    Outcome

    Sentence
    Structure and
    Mechanics

    40 to >35.6 ptsExceeds ExpectationsThe writer makes minimal (if any)
    errors in grammar, spelling, and/or punctuation. There are no fragments
    or run-on sentences.

    35.6 to >31.6 ptsMeets ExpectationsThe writer makes some errors in
    grammar, spelling, and/or punctuation, but these errors do not
    significantly distract the reader from the substance of the text. The paper
    contains few (if any) fragments and/or run-on sentences.

    31.6 to >28.8 ptsApproaches ExpectationsThe writer makes numerous
    errors in grammar, spelling, punctuation, and/or sentence structure,
    which at times distract the reader from the substance of the text.

    28.8 to >0 ptsDoes Not Meet ExpectationsThe writer makes a
    significant number of errors in grammar, spelling, punctuation, and/or
    sentence structure, regularly distracting the reader from the substance of
    the text and hindering comprehension.

    40
    pts

    This criterion is
    linked to a
    Learning
    Outcome

    Format/Crediti
    ng Sources

    20 to >17.8 ptsExceeds ExpectationsThe writer makes minimal (if any)
    errors in APA style format, citations, or references.

    17.8 to >15.8 ptsMeets ExpectationsThe writer makes some errors in
    APA style format, citations, or references.

    15.8 to >14.4 ptsApproaches ExpectationsThe writer makes numerous
    errors in APA style format, citations, or references.

    14.4 to >0 ptsDoes Not Meet ExpectationsThe writer makes significant
    errors in APA style format, citations, or references.

    20
    pts

    Total Points: 200

    FOLLOWING THE ROUGH DRAFT PROVIDED BUT MAKE SURE IT HAS 3 SOURCES

    – eek 8 Writing Assignment: Analytical Paper Final Draft
    – Rubric

    **## RoughDraft_Chopin11.docx**

    Analytical Paper 1

    **Analytical Paper**

    Rodolfo Nieto

    West Coast University

    English 240: Written Communications

    Melissa Cueto

    May 2026

    **Oppression, Irony, and the Powerlessness of Women in Kate Chopin’s Stories**

    Kate Chopin was an American writer of the 19th century whose works questioned the social constructions of their era, especially gender and race.
    _“Désirée’s Baby”_(published January 14, 1893) is a story about a woman who is left by her husband when their baby turns out to be of mixed race, whereas
    _“The Story of an Hour”_(published April 19, 1894) is about a woman who momentarily feels liberated after her husband dies. Both stories are set in the American South of the 1800s, a place ruled by strict racial and gender inequalities.
    _“The Story of an Hour”_ and
    _“Désirée’s Baby”_ by Kate Chopin have several similar elements—the theme of oppression, dramatic irony, setting symbolism, and the powerlessness of women—which altogether help to successfully criticize the devastating social expectations of 19th-century American society (Chopin, 1893, 1894).

    Both stories demonstrate how women are trapped by the people and systems surrounding them, and how oppression ultimately destroys them. “There would be no powerful will bending hers in that blind persistence with which men and women believe they have a right to impose a private will upon a fellow-creature” (Chopin, 1894). Louise understood the domination of her husband as something he did not realize was harmful, revealing that her marriage was more like a prison than a loving relationship. “Yes, go.” “Do you want me to go?” “Yes, I want you to go” (Chopin, 1893). Armand treats Désirée coldly, demonstrating that he holds total power over her life; a single word from him collapses her entire world, and she has no ability to resist or defend herself. “When he frowned she trembled, but loved him. When he smiled, she asked no greater blessing of God” (Chopin, 1893). This passage reveals how completely Désirée’s emotional well-being depended on Armand’s moods, illustrating the total emotional control men exercised over women in this era. “She breathed a quick prayer that life might be long. It was only yesterday she had thought with a shudder that life might be long” (Chopin, 1894). The reversal in Louise’s feelings about the length of her life shows how oppressive her marriage truly was—what once felt like a burden now feels like a gift the moment she believes she is free.

    In addition to oppression, both stories employ dramatic irony to deliver their most powerful and gut-wrenching final moments. “Night and day, I thank the good God for having so arranged our lives that our dear Armand will never know that his mother…belongs to the race that is cursed with the brand of slavery” (Chopin, 1893). Armand sought to destroy his family to protect his “pure” name, yet he himself was of mixed race all along—making his cruelty utterly pointless and deeply ironic. “When the doctors came they said she had died of heart disease—of the joy that kills” (Chopin, 1894). The doctors believe Louise died of joy, but the reader knows she died from losing the freedom she had just discovered—creating the story’s sharpest irony. “It was he who had been in the newspaper office when intelligence of the railroad disaster was received, with Brently Mallard’s name leading the list of ‘killed’” (Chopin, 1894). The reader is told from the very first paragraph that Brently may not actually be dead, since the news was unverified. This creates dramatic irony throughout the story as Louise celebrates a freedom that was never real. “There was the remnant of one back in the drawer from which he took them. But it was not Désirée’s; it was part of an old letter from his mother to his father” (Chopin, 1893). Chopin withholds the reveal of Armand’s true ancestry until the very last lines, so the reader understands simultaneously with Armand that everything he did to Désirée was based on a lie about his own identity.

    In addition to irony, the physical settings of both stories are used to reflect the emotional states of the characters. “She could see in the open square before her house the tops of trees that were all aquiver with the new spring life. The delicious breath of rain was in the air” (Chopin, 1894). The spring scene reflects Louise’s internal awakening, as though nature itself is celebrating alongside her newfound sense of freedom. “Big, solemn oaks grew close to it, and their thick-leaved, far-reaching branches shadowed it like a pall” (Chopin, 1893). The word “pall”—a cloth draped over a coffin—foreshadows death even before any tragedy occurs, establishing L’Abri as a doomed, oppressive place from the start. “There were patches of blue sky showing here and there through the clouds that had met and piled one above the other in the west facing her window” (Chopin, 1894). The blue sky breaking through dark clouds is a symbol of hope and freedom emerging from the suffocating weight of Louise’s marriage, mirroring her emotional journey in this scene. “She disappeared among the reeds and willows that grew thick along the banks of the deep, sluggish bayou; and she did not come back again” (Chopin, 1893). Désirée’s walk into the murky bayou uses the dark, still water as a symbol of death and erasure. Unlike Louise’s window of possibility, Désirée’s setting offers no escape—only disappearance.

    Most significantly, both stories portray women who have almost no control over their own lives in a male-dominated world. “She was young, with a fair, calm face, whose lines bespoke repression and even a certain strength” (Chopin, 1894). The repression visible on Louise’s face indicates that her powerlessness is not a new condition but a lifetime of suppression written into her very appearance. “Moreover he no longer loved her, because of the unconscious injury she had brought upon his home and his name” (Chopin, 1893). Armand treats Désirée as an object that either elevates or damages his social standing—never as a full person—showing how little power women had over their own value and identity in this society. “There would be no one to live for during those coming years; she would live for herself” (Chopin, 1894). The fact that living for herself is a radical, almost shocking idea for Louise reveals just how completely women’s identities were expected to be defined by their husbands in this era. “Armand looked into her eyes and did not care. He was reminded that she was nameless” (Chopin, 1893). Désirée’s lack of a family name meant she had no identity or social standing of her own—she was entirely dependent on Armand to give her one, perfectly illustrating the powerlessness of women without male validation.

    Overall, through the use of oppression, dramatic irony, symbolic setting, and the depiction of women’s powerlessness, Chopin’s two stories together create an accurate portrait of how 19th-century society failed the individuals living within its rigid constraints. These stories demonstrate that racism and sexism share the same root belief—that some people have a right to dominate others—and Chopin shows that both forms of oppression cause irreversible harm. The tragic endings suggest that Chopin believed her society could not offer justice to women, and she wrote these stories to challenge readers to imagine how it could be different. These themes remain urgently relevant today, which is testament to how far ahead of her time Kate Chopin truly was.

    **References**

    Chopin, K. (1893).
    _Désirée’s baby._ https://www.katechopin.org/pdfs/desirees-baby.pdf

    Chopin, K. (1894).
    _The story of an hour._ https://my.hrw.com/support/hos/hostpdf/host_text_219.pdf

    **## Untitleddocument51.pdf**

    eek 8 Writing
    Assignment: Analytical
    Paper Final Draft

    Points 200
    Submitting a text entry box, a website url, a media recording, or a file upload

    Using the critical reading skills practiced in class, you will be writing an analytical essay.
    In order to analyze a text effectively, you will need to engage in close reading, or
    reading “between the lines.” This means that you will be choosing representative
    passages and carefully deconstructing them, highlighting meanings that may not be
    immediately obvious to fellow readers in order to support your overall interpretation of
    the text (the thesis statement).

    The idea is to reach a deep understanding of the text by examining the writer’s narrative
    elements (i.e., characters, diction, style, theme, and tone), everything that went into
    writing the piece. Whatever work you choose, you should first read it carefully (usually
    more than once) and arrive at your own understanding of what you read (as we have
    done weekly within our discussion board assignments.) The next step is to see what
    others have said about it (that’s the research part) and compare your findings with
    theirs.

    Your paper must include the following:

    ● An introduction that provides relevant background information and ends with
    your thesis statement

    ● A minimum of four body paragraphs, each of which addresses a particular
    subtopic that relates to your thesis statement

    ● A minimum of three references from reliable, academic sources, all of which
    are cited at least once in the paper. You should use at least one
    peer-reviewed source from the library databases.

    ● A conclusion that reaffirms your thesis statement and addresses wider
    implications

    ● Formatting, citations, and references must all adhere to APA style
    ● Page length – approximately 3-5 pages, not including title and reference

    pages

    Do not rely solely on the instructions you see here. Your instructor will provide a
    list of texts to choose from and further details in the announcements page, so
    make sure to check there for complete guidelines regarding your analytical paper.

    See the rubric for specific grading criteria.

    Resource: Use the Grammarly tool to catch and correct mistakes in your writing
    assignments.

    Points: 200
    Due Sunday, 11:59 p.m. (Pacific time)

    Rubric
    Analytical Paper: Final Draft

    Criteria Ratings Pts

    [https://guides.westcoastuniversity.edu/grammarly](https://guides.westcoastuniversity.edu/grammarly)

    This criterion is
    linked to a
    Learning
    Outcome

    Content

    60 to >53.4 ptsExceeds ExpectationsThe writer demonstrates original
    thought and critical thinking skills as well as an ability to skillfully
    deconstruct and interpret a text or idea – to simultaneously see behind
    the surface and think beyond it, addressing wider implications. He/she
    presents a clear, focused central analysis (thesis) of the text or idea and
    supports it effectively with concrete details, examples, and sound logic.
    Other authors’ ideas are skillfully paraphrased. Direct quotations are
    minimal and well-chosen. All sources are relevant and appropriate, and
    the writer’s ideas are insightful and thought-provoking.

    53.4 to >47.4 ptsMeets ExpectationsThe writer presents and supports a
    clear and focused central analysis (thesis) of the text or idea, but ideas
    may not be consistently insightful or thought-provoking. Supporting
    details are relevant and logical but may lack depth. Other authors’ ideas
    are effectively paraphrased, and direct quotations are minimal. All
    sources are relevant and appropriate.

    47.4 to >43.2 ptsApproaches ExpectationsThe writer presents a
    central analysis (thesis) of the text or idea, but it may be overly
    general/broad and does not demonstrate thorough contemplation. He/she
    adequately supports the central analysis, but supporting points may at
    times be vague and/or lacking in originality. The writer makes an effort to
    paraphrase but at times struggles to express ideas in his/her own words.
    The essay lacks interesting details, and/or not all sources are relevant
    and appropriate.

    43.2 to >0 ptsDoes Not Meet ExpectationsThe writer’s central analysis
    (thesis) is unclear or missing, and the essay lacks focus. Supporting
    details are insufficient, not relevant, and/or not based on sound logic.
    Attempts to paraphrase do not always reflect understanding. The writer
    has not used enough sources, and/or the sources are not all relevant and
    appropriate.

    60
    pts

    This criterion is
    linked to a
    Learning
    Outcome

    Organization

    40 to >35.6 ptsExceeds ExpectationsThe writer demonstrates a clear
    sense of direction. The paper includes an engaging introduction and
    conclusion. Paragraphs are unified and arranged in a logical order. Each
    paragraph begins with a clear topic sentence that introduces the main
    idea of that paragraph. The writer smoothly transitions from paragraph to
    paragraph, showing connections between related ideas. Supporting
    details within paragraphs are well-organized, and research is
    well-integrated.

    35.6 to >31.6 ptsMeets ExpectationsThe writer demonstrates a sense
    of direction. The paper includes a strong introduction and conclusion.
    Paragraphs are unified and include topic sentences, but they may lack
    smooth transitions between ideas. The organization of supporting details
    within paragraphs may need improvement.

    31.6 to >28.8 ptsApproaches ExpectationsThe writer demonstrates
    some direction and includes an adequate introduction and conclusion,
    but topic sentences and transitions are weak. The paragraphs show unity,
    but they are not arranged in any discernable order, and supporting details
    may not always be well-organized.

    28.8 to >0 ptsDoes Not Meet ExpectationsThe writer demonstrates
    little or no direction. The introduction and conclusion are weak. It is
    difficult to identify a single subtopic for each paragraph because
    paragraphs are not unified and lack clear topic sentences or transitions.
    The order of body paragraphs seems random, as do the supporting
    details within them.

    40
    pts

    This criterion is
    linked to a
    Learning
    Outcome

    Style/Languag
    e

    40 to >35.6 ptsExceeds ExpectationsThe writer’s tone is confident,
    engaging, and appropriate for the assignment and/or the intended
    audience. The text demonstrates strong vocabulary skills and does not
    suffer from errors in word choice. The writer expresses ideas concisely,
    only using as many words as necessary to communicate a point. The
    writer achieves flow and readability by employing sentence variety
    successfully.

    35.6 to >31.6 ptsMeets ExpectationsThe writer’s tone is appropriate
    and effective overall. The text demonstrates good use of vocabulary and
    contains few (if any) errors in word choice. The writer expresses ideas
    concisely and clearly most of the time. The writer makes an effort to
    employ sentence variety.

    31.6 to >28.8 ptsApproaches ExpectationsThe writer’s tone suffers
    from one or more possible problems. Depending on the assignment, it
    may be too informal, too personal, not authoritative enough, etc.
    Numerous sentences suffer from lack of variety, awkward constructions,
    wordiness, limited vocabulary, and/or errors in word choice.

    28.8 to >0 ptsDoes Not Meet ExpectationsThe writer often fails to
    communicate ideas effectively because the paper suffers from significant
    problems with tone, language use, and/or wordiness.

    40
    pts

    This criterion is
    linked to a
    Learning
    Outcome

    Sentence
    Structure and
    Mechanics

    40 to >35.6 ptsExceeds ExpectationsThe writer makes minimal (if any)
    errors in grammar, spelling, and/or punctuation. There are no fragments
    or run-on sentences.

    35.6 to >31.6 ptsMeets ExpectationsThe writer makes some errors in
    grammar, spelling, and/or punctuation, but these errors do not
    significantly distract the reader from the substance of the text. The paper
    contains few (if any) fragments and/or run-on sentences.

    31.6 to >28.8 ptsApproaches ExpectationsThe writer makes numerous
    errors in grammar, spelling, punctuation, and/or sentence structure,
    which at times distract the reader from the substance of the text.

    28.8 to >0 ptsDoes Not Meet ExpectationsThe writer makes a
    significant number of errors in grammar, spelling, punctuation, and/or
    sentence structure, regularly distracting the reader from the substance of
    the text and hindering comprehension.

    40
    pts

    This criterion is
    linked to a
    Learning
    Outcome

    Format/Crediti
    ng Sources

    20 to >17.8 ptsExceeds ExpectationsThe writer makes minimal (if any)
    errors in APA style format, citations, or references.

    17.8 to >15.8 ptsMeets ExpectationsThe writer makes some errors in
    APA style format, citations, or references.

    15.8 to >14.4 ptsApproaches ExpectationsThe writer makes numerous
    errors in APA style format, citations, or references.

    14.4 to >0 ptsDoes Not Meet ExpectationsThe writer makes significant
    errors in APA style format, citations, or references.

    20
    pts

    Total Points: 200

    FOLLOWING THE ROUGH DRAFT PROVIDED BUT MAKE SURE IT HAS 3 SOURCES

    – eek 8 Writing Assignment: Analytical Paper Final Draft
    – Rubric

    **## RoughDraft_Chopin11.docx**

    Analytical Paper 1

    **Analytical Paper**

    Rodolfo Nieto

    West Coast University

    English 240: Written Communications

    Melissa Cueto

    May 2026

    **Oppression, Irony, and the Powerlessness of Women in Kate Chopin’s Stories**

    Kate Chopin was an American writer of the 19th century whose works questioned the social constructions of their era, especially gender and race.
    _“Désirée’s Baby”_(published January 14, 1893) is a story about a woman who is left by her husband when their baby turns out to be of mixed race, whereas
    _“The Story of an Hour”_(published April 19, 1894) is about a woman who momentarily feels liberated after her husband dies. Both stories are set in the American South of the 1800s, a place ruled by strict racial and gender inequalities.
    _“The Story of an Hour”_ and
    _“Désirée’s Baby”_ by Kate Chopin have several similar elements—the theme of oppression, dramatic irony, setting symbolism, and the powerlessness of women—which altogether help to successfully criticize the devastating social expectations of 19th-century American society (Chopin, 1893, 1894).

    Both stories demonstrate how women are trapped by the people and systems surrounding them, and how oppression ultimately destroys them. “There would be no powerful will bending hers in that blind persistence with which men and women believe they have a right to impose a private will upon a fellow-creature” (Chopin, 1894). Louise understood the domination of her husband as something he did not realize was harmful, revealing that her marriage was more like a prison than a loving relationship. “Yes, go.” “Do you want me to go?” “Yes, I want you to go” (Chopin, 1893). Armand treats Désirée coldly, demonstrating that he holds total power over her life; a single word from him collapses her entire world, and she has no ability to resist or defend herself. “When he frowned she trembled, but loved him. When he smiled, she asked no greater blessing of God” (Chopin, 1893). This passage reveals how completely Désirée’s emotional well-being depended on Armand’s moods, illustrating the total emotional control men exercised over women in this era. “She breathed a quick prayer that life might be long. It was only yesterday she had thought with a shudder that life might be long” (Chopin, 1894). The reversal in Louise’s feelings about the length of her life shows how oppressive her marriage truly was—what once felt like a burden now feels like a gift the moment she believes she is free.

    In addition to oppression, both stories employ dramatic irony to deliver their most powerful and gut-wrenching final moments. “Night and day, I thank the good God for having so arranged our lives that our dear Armand will never know that his mother…belongs to the race that is cursed with the brand of slavery” (Chopin, 1893). Armand sought to destroy his family to protect his “pure” name, yet he himself was of mixed race all along—making his cruelty utterly pointless and deeply ironic. “When the doctors came they said she had died of heart disease—of the joy that kills” (Chopin, 1894). The doctors believe Louise died of joy, but the reader knows she died from losing the freedom she had just discovered—creating the story’s sharpest irony. “It was he who had been in the newspaper office when intelligence of the railroad disaster was received, with Brently Mallard’s name leading the list of ‘killed’” (Chopin, 1894). The reader is told from the very first paragraph that Brently may not actually be dead, since the news was unverified. This creates dramatic irony throughout the story as Louise celebrates a freedom that was never real. “There was the remnant of one back in the drawer from which he took them. But it was not Désirée’s; it was part of an old letter from his mother to his father” (Chopin, 1893). Chopin withholds the reveal of Armand’s true ancestry until the very last lines, so the reader understands simultaneously with Armand that everything he did to Désirée was based on a lie about his own identity.

    In addition to irony, the physical settings of both stories are used to reflect the emotional states of the characters. “She could see in the open square before her house the tops of trees that were all aquiver with the new spring life. The delicious breath of rain was in the air” (Chopin, 1894). The spring scene reflects Louise’s internal awakening, as though nature itself is celebrating alongside her newfound sense of freedom. “Big, solemn oaks grew close to it, and their thick-leaved, far-reaching branches shadowed it like a pall” (Chopin, 1893). The word “pall”—a cloth draped over a coffin—foreshadows death even before any tragedy occurs, establishing L’Abri as a doomed, oppressive place from the start. “There were patches of blue sky showing here and there through the clouds that had met and piled one above the other in the west facing her window” (Chopin, 1894). The blue sky breaking through dark clouds is a symbol of hope and freedom emerging from the suffocating weight of Louise’s marriage, mirroring her emotional journey in this scene. “She disappeared among the reeds and willows that grew thick along the banks of the deep, sluggish bayou; and she did not come back again” (Chopin, 1893). Désirée’s walk into the murky bayou uses the dark, still water as a symbol of death and erasure. Unlike Louise’s window of possibility, Désirée’s setting offers no escape—only disappearance.

    Most significantly, both stories portray women who have almost no control over their own lives in a male-dominated world. “She was young, with a fair, calm face, whose lines bespoke repression and even a certain strength” (Chopin, 1894). The repression visible on Louise’s face indicates that her powerlessness is not a new condition but a lifetime of suppression written into her very appearance. “Moreover he no longer loved her, because of the unconscious injury she had brought upon his home and his name” (Chopin, 1893). Armand treats Désirée as an object that either elevates or damages his social standing—never as a full person—showing how little power women had over their own value and identity in this society. “There would be no one to live for during those coming years; she would live for herself” (Chopin, 1894). The fact that living for herself is a radical, almost shocking idea for Louise reveals just how completely women’s identities were expected to be defined by their husbands in this era. “Armand looked into her eyes and did not care. He was reminded that she was nameless” (Chopin, 1893). Désirée’s lack of a family name meant she had no identity or social standing of her own—she was entirely dependent on Armand to give her one, perfectly illustrating the powerlessness of women without male validation.

    Overall, through the use of oppression, dramatic irony, symbolic setting, and the depiction of women’s powerlessness, Chopin’s two stories together create an accurate portrait of how 19th-century society failed the individuals living within its rigid constraints. These stories demonstrate that racism and sexism share the same root belief—that some people have a right to dominate others—and Chopin shows that both forms of oppression cause irreversible harm. The tragic endings suggest that Chopin believed her society could not offer justice to women, and she wrote these stories to challenge readers to imagine how it could be different. These themes remain urgently relevant today, which is testament to how far ahead of her time Kate Chopin truly was.

    **References**

    Chopin, K. (1893).
    _Désirée’s baby._ https://www.katechopin.org/pdfs/desirees-baby.pdf

    Chopin, K. (1894).
    _The story of an hour._ https://my.hrw.com/support/hos/hostpdf/host_text_219.pdf

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    eek 8 Writing
    Assignment: Analytical
    Paper Final Draft

    Points 200
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    Using the critical reading skills practiced in class, you will be writing an analytical essay.
    In order to analyze a text effectively, you will need to engage in close reading, or
    reading “between the lines.” This means that you will be choosing representative
    passages and carefully deconstructing them, highlighting meanings that may not be
    immediately obvious to fellow readers in order to support your overall interpretation of
    the text (the thesis statement).

    The idea is to reach a deep understanding of the text by examining the writer’s narrative
    elements (i.e., characters, diction, style, theme, and tone), everything that went into
    writing the piece. Whatever work you choose, you should first read it carefully (usually
    more than once) and arrive at your own understanding of what you read (as we have
    done weekly within our discussion board assignments.) The next step is to see what
    others have said about it (that’s the research part) and compare your findings with
    theirs.

    Your paper must include the following:

    ● An introduction that provides relevant background information and ends with
    your thesis statement

    ● A minimum of four body paragraphs, each of which addresses a particular
    subtopic that relates to your thesis statement

    ● A minimum of three references from reliable, academic sources, all of which
    are cited at least once in the paper. You should use at least one
    peer-reviewed source from the library databases.

    ● A conclusion that reaffirms your thesis statement and addresses wider
    implications

    ● Formatting, citations, and references must all adhere to APA style
    ● Page length – approximately 3-5 pages, not including title and reference

    pages

    Do not rely solely on the instructions you see here. Your instructor will provide a
    list of texts to choose from and further details in the announcements page, so
    make sure to check there for complete guidelines regarding your analytical paper.

    See the rubric for specific grading criteria.

    Resource: Use the Grammarly tool to catch and correct mistakes in your writing
    assignments.

    Points: 200
    Due Sunday, 11:59 p.m. (Pacific time)

    Rubric
    Analytical Paper: Final Draft

    Criteria Ratings Pts

    [https://guides.westcoastuniversity.edu/grammarly](https://guides.westcoastuniversity.edu/grammarly)

    This criterion is
    linked to a
    Learning
    Outcome

    Content

    60 to >53.4 ptsExceeds ExpectationsThe writer demonstrates original
    thought and critical thinking skills as well as an ability to skillfully
    deconstruct and interpret a text or idea – to simultaneously see behind
    the surface and think beyond it, addressing wider implications. He/she
    presents a clear, focused central analysis (thesis) of the text or idea and
    supports it effectively with concrete details, examples, and sound logic.
    Other authors’ ideas are skillfully paraphrased. Direct quotations are
    minimal and well-chosen. All sources are relevant and appropriate, and
    the writer’s ideas are insightful and thought-provoking.

    53.4 to >47.4 ptsMeets ExpectationsThe writer presents and supports a
    clear and focused central analysis (thesis) of the text or idea, but ideas
    may not be consistently insightful or thought-provoking. Supporting
    details are relevant and logical but may lack depth. Other authors’ ideas
    are effectively paraphrased, and direct quotations are minimal. All
    sources are relevant and appropriate.

    47.4 to >43.2 ptsApproaches ExpectationsThe writer presents a
    central analysis (thesis) of the text or idea, but it may be overly
    general/broad and does not demonstrate thorough contemplation. He/she
    adequately supports the central analysis, but supporting points may at
    times be vague and/or lacking in originality. The writer makes an effort to
    paraphrase but at times struggles to express ideas in his/her own words.
    The essay lacks interesting details, and/or not all sources are relevant
    and appropriate.

    43.2 to >0 ptsDoes Not Meet ExpectationsThe writer’s central analysis
    (thesis) is unclear or missing, and the essay lacks focus. Supporting
    details are insufficient, not relevant, and/or not based on sound logic.
    Attempts to paraphrase do not always reflect understanding. The writer
    has not used enough sources, and/or the sources are not all relevant and
    appropriate.

    60
    pts

    This criterion is
    linked to a
    Learning
    Outcome

    Organization

    40 to >35.6 ptsExceeds ExpectationsThe writer demonstrates a clear
    sense of direction. The paper includes an engaging introduction and
    conclusion. Paragraphs are unified and arranged in a logical order. Each
    paragraph begins with a clear topic sentence that introduces the main
    idea of that paragraph. The writer smoothly transitions from paragraph to
    paragraph, showing connections between related ideas. Supporting
    details within paragraphs are well-organized, and research is
    well-integrated.

    35.6 to >31.6 ptsMeets ExpectationsThe writer demonstrates a sense
    of direction. The paper includes a strong introduction and conclusion.
    Paragraphs are unified and include topic sentences, but they may lack
    smooth transitions between ideas. The organization of supporting details
    within paragraphs may need improvement.

    31.6 to >28.8 ptsApproaches ExpectationsThe writer demonstrates
    some direction and includes an adequate introduction and conclusion,
    but topic sentences and transitions are weak. The paragraphs show unity,
    but they are not arranged in any discernable order, and supporting details
    may not always be well-organized.

    28.8 to >0 ptsDoes Not Meet ExpectationsThe writer demonstrates
    little or no direction. The introduction and conclusion are weak. It is
    difficult to identify a single subtopic for each paragraph because
    paragraphs are not unified and lack clear topic sentences or transitions.
    The order of body paragraphs seems random, as do the supporting
    details within them.

    40
    pts

    This criterion is
    linked to a
    Learning
    Outcome

    Style/Languag
    e

    40 to >35.6 ptsExceeds ExpectationsThe writer’s tone is confident,
    engaging, and appropriate for the assignment and/or the intended
    audience. The text demonstrates strong vocabulary skills and does not
    suffer from errors in word choice. The writer expresses ideas concisely,
    only using as many words as necessary to communicate a point. The
    writer achieves flow and readability by employing sentence variety
    successfully.

    35.6 to >31.6 ptsMeets ExpectationsThe writer’s tone is appropriate
    and effective overall. The text demonstrates good use of vocabulary and
    contains few (if any) errors in word choice. The writer expresses ideas
    concisely and clearly most of the time. The writer makes an effort to
    employ sentence variety.

    31.6 to >28.8 ptsApproaches ExpectationsThe writer’s tone suffers
    from one or more possible problems. Depending on the assignment, it
    may be too informal, too personal, not authoritative enough, etc.
    Numerous sentences suffer from lack of variety, awkward constructions,
    wordiness, limited vocabulary, and/or errors in word choice.

    28.8 to >0 ptsDoes Not Meet ExpectationsThe writer often fails to
    communicate ideas effectively because the paper suffers from significant
    problems with tone, language use, and/or wordiness.

    40
    pts

    This criterion is
    linked to a
    Learning
    Outcome

    Sentence
    Structure and
    Mechanics

    40 to >35.6 ptsExceeds ExpectationsThe writer makes minimal (if any)
    errors in grammar, spelling, and/or punctuation. There are no fragments
    or run-on sentences.

    35.6 to >31.6 ptsMeets ExpectationsThe writer makes some errors in
    grammar, spelling, and/or punctuation, but these errors do not
    significantly distract the reader from the substance of the text. The paper
    contains few (if any) fragments and/or run-on sentences.

    31.6 to >28.8 ptsApproaches ExpectationsThe writer makes numerous
    errors in grammar, spelling, punctuation, and/or sentence structure,
    which at times distract the reader from the substance of the text.

    28.8 to >0 ptsDoes Not Meet ExpectationsThe writer makes a
    significant number of errors in grammar, spelling, punctuation, and/or
    sentence structure, regularly distracting the reader from the substance of
    the text and hindering comprehension.

    40
    pts

    This criterion is
    linked to a
    Learning
    Outcome

    Format/Crediti
    ng Sources

    20 to >17.8 ptsExceeds ExpectationsThe writer makes minimal (if any)
    errors in APA style format, citations, or references.

    17.8 to >15.8 ptsMeets ExpectationsThe writer makes some errors in
    APA style format, citations, or references.

    15.8 to >14.4 ptsApproaches ExpectationsThe writer makes numerous
    errors in APA style format, citations, or references.

    14.4 to >0 ptsDoes Not Meet ExpectationsThe writer makes significant
    errors in APA style format, citations, or references.

    20
    pts

    Total Points: 200

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    You will create an annotated bibliography of 7 sources (4 primary sources and 3 secondary sources) based on the thesis statement(see at the end of this document.)The annotated bibliography will adhere to APA formatting.
    **Discuss and Reflect on the Following:**

    · What search strategy advice would you give to a student that is beginning their search for credible sources? For example, where should they look? How should they construct their searches?

    · What themes or patterns emerged across your sources?

    · What gaps, contradictions, or new questions emerged from your research?

    Please be sure to validate your opinions and ideas with citations and references in APA format if applicable.

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    **1**-“This research paper examines the positive and negative impacts of social media short-form videos on adolescents’ psychological and psychosocial well-being. In most circumstances, parents and schoolteachers would equal the usage of social media with bad influences and results to their children and students. However, with the rapid development of social media, it is easily accessible to everyone, including adolescents as one of the major user groups. They choose to use social media to meet their certain needs and gratifications. So, there should be some positive impacts that go along with the usage of social media, particularly the short-form videos. Incorporating responses from interviews, this study demonstrates that the short-form videos on social media have both positive and negative impacts. Positive impacts play an important role on the usage of social media, which includes improving recognition level, enhancing social interactive skills, relieving stress level, etc. The adolescents’ social media dependency is not as heavy as most of the adults assume. This paper puts forward several suggestions to allow adolescents to use social media, especially short-form videos, benefiting their psychological and psychosocial well-being to the most and prevent short-form video addiction.”

    Wang, Wenjie.
    **SHS Web of Conferences; Les Ulis**,  Vol. 199, (2024).

    **2**-“This longitudinal study examined the long-term effects of the COVID-19 pandemic on social media use and its impact on psychiatric symptoms and well-being of 3,697 Israeli children and adolescents aged 8 to 14. Data were collected from October 2019 to June 2023, covering four school years and five measurement points prior to, throughout and post- COVID-19. Social media usage, psychiatric symptoms (depression, anxiety, somatization, and general distress), as well as subjective well-being (positive and negative emotions, and life satisfaction) were assessed. The analysis also probed the extent to which social support and extracurricular activities moderated the associations between social media use and mental health outcomes. The results of the growth mixed-effects models indicated a significant increase in social media use and psychiatric symptoms, and a significant decrease in subjective well-being over time. Greater social media use was related to more psychiatric symptoms and negative emotions, but also to more positive emotions and life satisfaction. Social support buffered the negative effects of excessive social media use on mental health, whereas extracurricular activities increased positive emotions, but also psychiatric symptoms related to social media use. These findings highlight the need for targeted interventions to regulate social media usage, given its lasting consequences on the mental health of children and adolescents in the wake of the COVID-19 pandemic.”

    Shoshani, Anat; Kor, Ariel; Bar, Shira.
    **European Child & Adolescent Psychiatry; New York** Vol. 33, Iss. 11,  (Nov 2024): 4013-4027

    **3**-“ In the contemporary digital era, social media has assumed an indispensable role in the daily lives of the youth. The present study endeavoured to investigate the psychological determinants that underlie social media addiction in young individuals. The present study specifically examined several key psychological factors that have been previously identified as crucial, including social comparison, the fear of missing out (FOMO), loneliness, perceived social support, and escapism. This paper examined the potential individual factors that may contribute to the phenomenon of social media addiction and the interventions. The current study utilised a mini literature review (MLR) as a methodological approach to identify the psychological factors that may contribute to the addiction to social media among the youths, as well as provide interventions. Drawing on relevant literature, the paperdiscovered the role of these factors like social comparison, FOMO, emotional attachment, and many others in the development of addictive behaviours. The interventions to the addition include but are not limited to family-based interventions, support groups, digital detox programs, and others. The study's implications for both research and interventions are thoroughly examined, emphasising the crucial necessity of specifically targeted interventions targeting the fundamental psychological factors. This research underscores the significance of comprehending the psychological determinants that underlie the youths' dependence on social media and emphasises the necessity for efficacious interventions to foster more healthy social media habits.”

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    **African Journal of Sociology, Psychology and Rural Studies; London** Vol. 4, Iss. 2,  (Dec 2024): 29–51.

    **Origional Thesis statement:**

    The topic I chose was the usage of social media in children under sixteen years old. My opinion on this subject is that there are some serious concerns about how social media is affecting the children of our current generation. While having access to social platforms can provide a sense of connection to friends and peers, there is also a downside to these resources.  Research has shown that consistent social media usage is linked to higher levels of depression and anxiety in adolescents as well as younger children. This fact has prompted the US Attorney Generals office to release an advisory in 2023. According to the advisory notice, there is evidence to support that social media causes potential harm to the mental health of children. It also states that frequent social media use could be associated with changes in parts of the brain related to emotions and learning. Also, it can affect impulse control, social behavior, and emotional regulation. (U.S. Department of Health and Human Services [HHS], 2023).

    The most concerning part about this data is that we have not had this type of technology for a relatively long period of time. So the fact that there is already a great deal of evidence to support the harmful findings, leads me to believe there is more proof to come with time. As a parent to teenagers and younger children, I strive to aid them in making positive choices  that are backed by the most current information we have. My choice of AI assistance in this discussion was to request a list of creditable websites to support my opinion that were from the last five years.

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    _Social Media and Mental Health in children and teens_. Available at: https://www.hopkinsmedicine.org/health/wellness-and-prevention/social-media-and-mental-health-in-children-and-teens (Accessed: 12 May 2026).

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    **Discuss and Reflect on the Following:**

    · What search strategy advice would you give to a student that is beginning their search for credible sources? For example, where should they look? How should they construct their searches?

    · What themes or patterns emerged across your sources?

    · What gaps, contradictions, or new questions emerged from your research?

    Please be sure to validate your opinions and ideas with citations and references in APA format if applicable.

    · APA Requirements

    · 1” inch margins

    · Times New Roman 12 pt font

    · Double-Spaced

    · Title Page

    · Reference Page and in-text citations

    **Use the 3 following sources and information to expand on my original thesis statement and to answer the questions and for 3 of the 7 citations. Also include my citation that is at the end of my thesis statement at the end of this document:**

    **1**-“This research paper examines the positive and negative impacts of social media short-form videos on adolescents’ psychological and psychosocial well-being. In most circumstances, parents and schoolteachers would equal the usage of social media with bad influences and results to their children and students. However, with the rapid development of social media, it is easily accessible to everyone, including adolescents as one of the major user groups. They choose to use social media to meet their certain needs and gratifications. So, there should be some positive impacts that go along with the usage of social media, particularly the short-form videos. Incorporating responses from interviews, this study demonstrates that the short-form videos on social media have both positive and negative impacts. Positive impacts play an important role on the usage of social media, which includes improving recognition level, enhancing social interactive skills, relieving stress level, etc. The adolescents’ social media dependency is not as heavy as most of the adults assume. This paper puts forward several suggestions to allow adolescents to use social media, especially short-form videos, benefiting their psychological and psychosocial well-being to the most and prevent short-form video addiction.”

    Wang, Wenjie.
    **SHS Web of Conferences; Les Ulis**,  Vol. 199, (2024).

    **2**-“This longitudinal study examined the long-term effects of the COVID-19 pandemic on social media use and its impact on psychiatric symptoms and well-being of 3,697 Israeli children and adolescents aged 8 to 14. Data were collected from October 2019 to June 2023, covering four school years and five measurement points prior to, throughout and post- COVID-19. Social media usage, psychiatric symptoms (depression, anxiety, somatization, and general distress), as well as subjective well-being (positive and negative emotions, and life satisfaction) were assessed. The analysis also probed the extent to which social support and extracurricular activities moderated the associations between social media use and mental health outcomes. The results of the growth mixed-effects models indicated a significant increase in social media use and psychiatric symptoms, and a significant decrease in subjective well-being over time. Greater social media use was related to more psychiatric symptoms and negative emotions, but also to more positive emotions and life satisfaction. Social support buffered the negative effects of excessive social media use on mental health, whereas extracurricular activities increased positive emotions, but also psychiatric symptoms related to social media use. These findings highlight the need for targeted interventions to regulate social media usage, given its lasting consequences on the mental health of children and adolescents in the wake of the COVID-19 pandemic.”

    Shoshani, Anat; Kor, Ariel; Bar, Shira.
    **European Child & Adolescent Psychiatry; New York** Vol. 33, Iss. 11,  (Nov 2024): 4013-4027

    **3**-“ In the contemporary digital era, social media has assumed an indispensable role in the daily lives of the youth. The present study endeavoured to investigate the psychological determinants that underlie social media addiction in young individuals. The present study specifically examined several key psychological factors that have been previously identified as crucial, including social comparison, the fear of missing out (FOMO), loneliness, perceived social support, and escapism. This paper examined the potential individual factors that may contribute to the phenomenon of social media addiction and the interventions. The current study utilised a mini literature review (MLR) as a methodological approach to identify the psychological factors that may contribute to the addiction to social media among the youths, as well as provide interventions. Drawing on relevant literature, the paperdiscovered the role of these factors like social comparison, FOMO, emotional attachment, and many others in the development of addictive behaviours. The interventions to the addition include but are not limited to family-based interventions, support groups, digital detox programs, and others. The study's implications for both research and interventions are thoroughly examined, emphasising the crucial necessity of specifically targeted interventions targeting the fundamental psychological factors. This research underscores the significance of comprehending the psychological determinants that underlie the youths' dependence on social media and emphasises the necessity for efficacious interventions to foster more healthy social media habits.”

    Journal

    JE. Chukwuere; Goodness Chinazor Joshua Chukwuere.
    **African Journal of Sociology, Psychology and Rural Studies; London** Vol. 4, Iss. 2,  (Dec 2024): 29–51.

    **Origional Thesis statement:**

    The topic I chose was the usage of social media in children under sixteen years old. My opinion on this subject is that there are some serious concerns about how social media is affecting the children of our current generation. While having access to social platforms can provide a sense of connection to friends and peers, there is also a downside to these resources.  Research has shown that consistent social media usage is linked to higher levels of depression and anxiety in adolescents as well as younger children. This fact has prompted the US Attorney Generals office to release an advisory in 2023. According to the advisory notice, there is evidence to support that social media causes potential harm to the mental health of children. It also states that frequent social media use could be associated with changes in parts of the brain related to emotions and learning. Also, it can affect impulse control, social behavior, and emotional regulation. (U.S. Department of Health and Human Services [HHS], 2023).

    The most concerning part about this data is that we have not had this type of technology for a relatively long period of time. So the fact that there is already a great deal of evidence to support the harmful findings, leads me to believe there is more proof to come with time. As a parent to teenagers and younger children, I strive to aid them in making positive choices  that are backed by the most current information we have. My choice of AI assistance in this discussion was to request a list of creditable websites to support my opinion that were from the last five years.

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    _Social Media and Mental Health in children and teens_. Available at: https://www.hopkinsmedicine.org/health/wellness-and-prevention/social-media-and-mental-health-in-children-and-teens (Accessed: 12 May 2026).